Comic 104 - Page 14 - The mercenary pals

8th Sep 2017, 9:05 AM in Chapter 2 - New players
Page 14 - The mercenary pals
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Darksh1ne 8th Sep 2017, 9:05 AM edit delete
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Comments:

jamie59 8th Sep 2017, 12:09 PM edit delete reply
jamie59
Dumb is the word for can't speak. Though it also is slang for reduced intellect.
Darksh1ne 8th Sep 2017, 2:38 PM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
Oh no, if Nara would say that here it would be an outright insult. Not something she intends to do, so we will go with mute
Db 8th Sep 2017, 12:11 PM edit delete reply
Ah, more of the characters, very nice. :D And a slightly touch to Jeb and his past, very, very nice! I like it!


Darksh1ne 8th Sep 2017, 2:37 PM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
Funny fact, I was going to bring this exact description of Jeb by Vortal in the old version as well, but it was supposed to happen further into the story, after the Theater of blood part. And the conversation would happen between Vortal and Milly, not Nara.

A part that will happen once we get back there, but it will be different now.
Db 12th Sep 2017, 8:07 PM edit delete reply
I see, I see. Can't wait to see how it will be then. :P
Prototype 8th Sep 2017, 9:32 PM edit delete reply
Prototype
Hmmmm. I gotta say the whole vortal pitch sounded more like a character description dump than something someone would actually say. (Unless that is how he usually presents himself of course.) The silent Jeb one sounded more like natural talk.
Darksh1ne 9th Sep 2017, 9:02 AM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
Hmm, may be you're right. I'll see how Vortal's speech could be changed.

And fixed!
Prototype 9th Sep 2017, 5:01 PM edit delete reply
Prototype
Yeah, much better. :)