Comic 204 - Page 13 - A second chance

8th Jan 2018, 8:34 PM in Chapter 3 - A special invitation
Page 13 - A second chance
Average Rating: 5 (3 votes)
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Db 8th Jan 2018, 8:38 PM edit delete reply
Well, those are some interesting Panels. My my, that's going to be fun. :D
jamie59 9th Jan 2018, 1:17 AM edit delete reply
jamie59
Well she's number one.
...(RockB) 9th Jan 2018, 6:47 AM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Well, that's not a good start of a relationship. Some people don't like surprises.

Edit, I only noticed now:
"way my" -> "way, my"
"If you will find" -> "If you find"
"not regret" -> "not regret it"
I had some practice with another comic, I guess I'm now into full typo-hunting mode :D
Dera Nuel 9th Jan 2018, 10:52 AM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
Wow...finally caught up. Great art by the way . you've also got an awesome story.
Darksh1ne 14th Jan 2018, 8:01 AM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
Thank you! That's my main goal - to tell a good story :)