Comic 386 - Page 76 - Windows of a soul

25th Sep 2018, 1:00 PM in Chapter 4 - Dangerous species
Page 76 - Windows of a soul
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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Darksh1ne 25th Sep 2018, 1:00 PM edit delete
Darksh1ne
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Db 25th Sep 2018, 1:53 PM edit delete reply
And they have quite some similarities...in some cases.
Darksh1ne 25th Sep 2018, 3:25 PM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
They do. Their designs were very similar in those days when I couldn't make more distinct faces. But now instead of changing Sorna's face entirely, I decided to simply make it part of the plot, especially considering how fitting the connection is ^^
Db 28th Sep 2018, 6:01 PM edit delete reply
And it adds nicely. :D
...(RockB) 26th Sep 2018, 9:18 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Getting hugged like that... ^___^

(English expression helper mode: "a lot like Sora had" ->
"a lot like Sora's" or
"a lot like Sora's eyes" or
"a lot like the eyes Sora had" :) )
Darksh1ne 27th Sep 2018, 6:39 AM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
Fixed that, thank you!

But... it's finally time for me to point out at your mistake as well! Muhahaha! it's Sorna, not Sora :]
...(RockB) 1st Oct 2018, 12:08 AM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
What... uh, indeed! Thank you! I don't know how that happened. :-/

(Really, I wish someone/everyone would point out my mistakes more. I think that I'm really good at English, for a German, but I still make mistakes and some are not just typos (the spelling checker catches about 80% of the typos and I catch some more after posting, but a few slip through) - like this "Sora".)
Darksh1ne 1st Oct 2018, 6:40 AM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
Oh ye mistakes that pass through checkers are those that don't count as mistakes. Sora could be a perfectly fine name after all ^^
...(RockB) 2nd Oct 2018, 11:28 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Maybe I have read "Sora" somewhere. It felt more familiar than "Sorna". The spelling checker complains about both...
Dera Nuel 16th Oct 2018, 3:56 PM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
Wow. Really loved the pacing here. Everything was revealed so slowly.
Darksh1ne 16th Oct 2018, 5:48 PM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
It wasn't easy, indeed. I had to reshuffle panels from page to page to make it work